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Boat City by Deevad Boat City by Deevad
Screenshot of some-making steps posted on my blog : [link]

done with Mypaint (dev) and Krita (dev)

Licensed under a CC-By-Nc-Nd : Reposting and usage of the artwork is free, allowed and encouraged, providing credits "Artwork : www.davidrevoy.com" but any usage of the artwork for commercial purposes or manipulations, derivations are strictly prohibited. Full license : [link] For commercial usage contact me.
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Composition intéressante et agréable à parcourir. On comprend que c'est le lieu de vie de la jeune fille, qu'elle se l'est approprié. Jolie lumière.

Après si je dois faire mon tatillon, les déchirures des coques des épaves me semblent improbables bien que pas choquantes pour autant non plus. Cette improbabilité peut concourir à nous transporter dans une autre univers où les détails diffèrent de notre réalité. Donc ce qui suit ne sont pas forcement des défauts de la composition mais des observations par rapport à la représentation du réel.

Exemple, la coque du bateau bleu derrière la fille semble au premier abord être en bois mais la forme de l'ouverture suggère que c'est plus proche du métal sans en être sûr non plus, comme si le choix n'avait pas été arrêté sur sa nature et que du coup elle se retrouve à cheval entre deux matière avec des déchirures qui ne correspondent ni à l'un ni à l'autre. Exemple de coque en bois: [link]

Autre exemple, la déchirure sur la coque métallique du bateau orange qui en soutient deux autres, elle correspond pour moi davantage un trou de rouille qu'au résultat d'un choc. Donc là également, un choix est à faire. Si c'est la rouille qui a bouffé la coque, on doit voir la rouille sur toute la coque, exemple: [link]
En revanche, si la coque a été déchiré par un rocher, il est peu probable que ça ressemble à ça. Des pliures et des déformations devraient alors apparaitre.

Globalement, les bateaux du dessins dont la coque est trouée ne semblent pas assez usés par le temps pour présenter ces symptômes. A moins qu'il s'agisse de trous d'éventration mais ce n'est pas probant.

Exemples de coques éventrées et d'épaves:
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ADFENO Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Aww! Cute! This reminds me of "Spirited Away", written and directed by Hayao Miyazaki. The best of all, it is original, that said, as far as I can see, there are no copies of the digital assets present in "Spirited Away", so it remains legal.

Also, it's under a Creative Commons license.


Best regards, ADFENO.
Have a nice day.

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Aww! Que bonito! Isso me lembra de "A Viagem de Chihiro", escrito e dirigido por Hayao Miyazaki. O melhor de tudo é que esta obra é original, digo isso pois, até onde vejo, não há nenhuma cópia dos recuros/conjuntos digitais presentes em "A Viagem de Chihiro", sendo assim, esta obra continua sendo legal.

Além disso, ela está sob uma licença Creative Commons.


Atenciosamente, ADFENO.
Tenha um bom dia.
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Deevad Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you
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ADFENO Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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It's me who needs to thank you. I really like the way how you and Ico-dY improved.


Best regards, ADFENO.
Have a nice day.

[PT-BR]

Sou eu quem precisa lhe agradecer. Gosto da maneira que você e Ico-dY melhoraram.


Atenciosamente, ADFENO.
Tenha um bom dia.
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MajaDalgaard Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your detail work is so amazing. Love the story here.
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MajaDalgaard Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gorgeous work!
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SayaOtonashi2012 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
weird...but good!!!
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AshiRox Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012   Digital Artist
Nice work, looks great. Your work is made ​​using soft brushes and bright colors are very nice.
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Ico-dY Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
The lighting, the chromatic choice and the subject make a very relaxed and peaceful atmosphere. The piece is rich of details offering a full vibrant and lively world. In my humble opinion the "flowing" of the water at the base of the dragon could be better empathizing the geometrical "S" shape of the creature. It feels a bit stiff. The perspective, the composition and the details (the bird for instance) dragged me to the stairs zone. Was it your intention? I could criticize others things, but sincerely it's hard (and pedantic :D) at this skill level to distinguish between an author mindful choice or not. The important thing is the overall impression and you surely hit the mark! ^^
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Deevad Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hey Ico-dY, oh yes, this picture have a lot of composition problem, stiff details , and un-motivated designs ( and also painted from imagination , without references... not a help for the boat as the critic I receive say precisely. ).
This is probably my longest painting ever made. I spent like a full week / full time on it without precise objective ; I probably wanted to focus on detailing this zoomed part or this one.
The result ; the picture could probably be cut , and posted as various illustration.
But I made so much of mistakes into this one, that I learned precious things for the next one :=)
thx again for the comment.
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ioanriz Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Good one.
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